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I hope people click here and help me out.
I wrote this cartoon, but I need a better ending.
Here's what I have so far.
https://www.redstate...peachment-1.jpg
https://www.redstate...peachment-2.jpg
https://www.redstate...peachment-3.jpg

and here is the last panel--which I am not happy with at all. So unless I can find a "real" ending or a punchline to the strip, I'm not going to publish it.

https://www.redstate...peachment-4.jpg

Can anybody help out?

Oh, and if you see some typos in the LONG text, I'd appreciate hearing about those too.
Thanks.
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Thats crazy!! We don't teach facts here, we teach truths!!

;)
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How dare you!
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Barricaded in panel 3 is misspelled.
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Mrdirt73, on 13 January 2020 - 04:20 PM, said:

Barricaded in panel 3 is misspelled.



Thanks.
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And since facts aren't a priority with educators these days, I thought a little invention was in order...
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That's intervention! Lol
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Third panel - "barriCaded", not "barriDaded"

Oops, I see MrDirt beat me to it.
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erp, on 13 January 2020 - 02:04 PM, said:

Thats crazy!! We don't teach facts here, we teach truths!! ;)


It all looks good to me LOL
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